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Vladamir...

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:05 am


My eyes are unfocused as I rush by her, this time not collapsing over her slight body.
I reach the edge of the cliff that I had first encountered her on, and take a deep breath.
All I have to do is take a step.
And it will be over.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:30 am

I watch the stallion now, wide awake and saw him pause at the cliff. Struggling to my feet I watch, then seeing him debate, flashbacks of before ran before my eyes and I stayed where I was... If I scared him... he would fall... It's his choice...

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:23 am


I turn around, calmly, looking at the weary mare over my shoulder.
I mouth something, carefully curving my lips around the vowels and constanants that my sentence created.
I smiled at her.
Before I went tumbling down.
I saw my hooves above me, and shut my eyes, embracing the sureness of my plan.
Crunch.
Vladamir? VLADAMIR?
"Ahhh!" I scream in pain.
It seemed to occur to me that falling from the top wasn't a good idea.
I had landed on the tiny cut path that I had followed to get up here.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:36 am

I watch as he mouthed words I could not understand. I watch as he smiles at my. I watch as he fell. I sobbed, closing my eyes as I heard the crunch... then a scream... He was still alive? Still with my eyes tightly shut I felt my way to the edge of the cliff and open them, looking down. Yes, he was there, but his bones broken, crushed. I sob, but follow the steep path down to him.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:47 am


I moan.
Low and harsh as she comes closer.
Do not touch me.
My legs...
My ribs...
I thrash with my two front legs and my neck, relieved to find that I could still move them.
My ribs...
My spine? I twist my body...bruised, but not snapped.
My ribs...
I move my left back leg and scream in shock.
Broken, but it seemed to be clean.
I move my other leg...
I sigh in relief. It's okay. Just my spine, ribs and one leg...
Lucky.
I stare at the gorse bush which had softened my fall and bless it, softly.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Mon Feb 02, 2009 1:51 am

I stop dead in my tracks as the faint sounds of broken bone moved against each other... Flicking my ears back and swishing my tail I tensed, waiting, waiting. He would have to stay here for a very long time if he did not want help... I shivered delicately at the thought of the carnivores.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Tue Feb 03, 2009 1:15 am


I nicker, half heartedly, already numb from the pain in my bones...
Bind broken ribs and bones tightly, Vlad. It'll help them set faster...
I begin to cough,
in response to the retching motion in my throat.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:37 pm

I eye the broken stallion closely, blinking slowly. "Would you like my help?" I whisper, shaking violently from the cold already. I look up at the pitch black sky. How long until sunrise? I look back down at the stallion, my eyes narrowing slightly.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:53 pm


I swivel my head to look at her, and I stare at her, my eyes sullen and sunken from pain.
I don't reply.
Instead I push my front legs and try to push my healthy back leg under me.
As I haul myself up, I scream, my eyes bulging slightly as I wobble and slump onto her shoulder, my wait causing us both to wobble unsteadily.
I whisper "My name is Vladamir..." I stare at her, deliriously.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:59 pm

I reposition my stance, pushing into the stallion gently, trying not to tough his wounds. "Vladimir... I am Fight Back..." I laugh loudly, slightly hysterical. "Suits me I think." I ignore the staring, piercing eyes on my face and I take a small step forward. "Can you walk? At least to somewhere... safe?"

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:02 pm


I grunt and nod, hopping unsteadily and speaking through my clenched teeth "We need to bind...my ribs and my...leg...but...I need fingers for that" I mumble, thinking desperately of how to cure myself as we walk a little faster.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:04 pm

"Fingers?" I ask as I matched my legs to his unsteady walk. "You were with the humans?" I whisper, fear overtaking my voice so it choked out. I had heard, even witnessed what they did to some horses, and I didn't like it.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:09 pm


I look at her, my eyes distant "Yeah. For quite a bit of my life..." I struggle to breathe, my ribs aching with a menace.
"Maybe...maybe we could wrap something around my legs, thightly...and hope that the ribs heal by themselves..."

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:13 pm

I nod to myself, taking in the stallion's words carefully. I pause for a second, bracing myself in case he needs more support than already and look around. I see some stong grass on a long plant and look at Vladimir. "Will that stuff do?" I whisper gently, nodding towards the plant.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:25 am


I nod, my neck slightly stiff.
"Yeah. Good enough for the leg, but I don't know about my ribs...I need to get into some water and then rest in a way that doesn't leave me lop sided..."
I mumble, indistinctly, picking up her heavenly scent.
I blink quickly and look away.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:49 am

I nod, slowly side-stepping gracefully so I could bend my head and snatch a piece of the sharp gras between my teeth. "There is a pond along this track, jsut further up. You can rest there." I sidle back to his side and take a step forward.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:42 am


I nod wearily and limp, bringing my leg up beneath my back haunches and wincing everytime I took a step.
I whisper, quietly "Where do you come from?"

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:58 am

I laugh, darkly, loudly until the birds flutter from their nests in the tree tops. "If I told you that, I would have to kill you." I murmer, my eyes guarded now, my muscles slightly tense as my free walk became a tense strut.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by Guest on Sat Feb 07, 2009 6:46 pm


I grin at her "I've been dead for a long time" I say, my voice hoarse with pain.
I quaver a little, unbalanced from her quick step and fall slightly to the side.

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Re: Vladamir...

Post by LilyGrey on Sat Feb 07, 2009 8:39 pm

I slow my stride slightly, matching it to his again, but my muscles were still tensed. "I can tell..." I murmer, flicking my ears toward the faint sound of water on rocks. "I come from a place far, far away... Where my happiness ruled and my life bloomed. Until one day-" I cut off with a choking sound and flicked my ears back into my dark mane. My eyes closed for a couple of seconds before I looked at the stallion from the corner of my eye. "We are nearly there." I said quickly, turning my head away.

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